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Old 01-31-04, 09:22 PM   #22
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art official - structure was ok at times........flow fell off........vocab was pretty basic.........multis were pretty wack.......poor attempt at wordplay.........most of the punches missed by a gigantic portion..........no personals........best bar -
Im like a veteran, Cuz theres no one i aint better than/
Four Year starter,and this rap shit is what im letterin' In.

lethalnjectionz - structure was good........flow was on target........vocab was ok........some of the multis were aight.........wordplay was good at times.........some of the punches hit hard........ok personal........best bar -
Callin Me Whack Bitch! But To My Game Your No Where Near..|
Watch Me Drop This Canadian Sin Like Catholic Mountaneers..||

conclusion - lethalnjectionz takes this in structure, flow, wordplay, punches, and personals so he gets my vote.........

VOTE - LETHALNJECTIONZ

yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110019

thanx........
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