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Old 02-01-04, 10:54 AM   #8
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I Used To Pray
 
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nice peice
Speak E.Z.- nice verse, very good verse to open with, more of the basic verse out of these 3 but explained more of the title and exposed this peice more then the rest.
Straight Ace- couldnt get a flow to this peice nor did i understand it untill the sanity line came up, now i know what you were trying to do and it came off good, good vocab and wordplay through this peice
Edicus- dopest of all 3 verses, had some trouble with flow but wordplay and structure made up for it, good vocab and imaginery
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