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nice peice
Speak E.Z.- nice verse, very good verse to open with, more of the basic verse out of these 3 but explained more of the title and exposed this peice more then the rest.
Straight Ace- couldnt get a flow to this peice nor did i understand it untill the sanity line came up, now i know what you were trying to do and it came off good, good vocab and wordplay through this peice
Edicus- dopest of all 3 verses, had some trouble with flow but wordplay and structure made up for it, good vocab and imaginery
*returns speek favor*
this was cool
This was a good collab, I didn't really feel the styles compliment each other, but thats not hating, thats just being picky, I thought speak e z had a nice consistant flow, while edicius and had a more interesting flow but i was feeling speak e z more, yet all flowed very nice. The depth was maintained by edicius, I was feeling your verse, I've read it many a time already, its very relative to many peoples life, there wasn't much on the base of cleevr wording or metas, but that wasn't necessary, since this was emotional, i think the lyrics would be very easy to put emotion into due to the good writing, well dne guys
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