...these Very Strong words from such a Young White Boy..
their Goes your End..career folds to that Quotes Extent
u Had a Chance to Swing back...
.................................till u Chose to Garment a Dress
check P's Battles..he's truly Taken on that Feeding Touch..
nah...most of this dont rhyme...It's not very hard hitting at all
You're right....
......U don't Really suck but You Sure Do Eat a Bunch..
I searched and searched to see if Kid was Worthy to Throw Down
Discovered his Signature Move...
.....................................When no Skill was Found....
aight, the end of this was ok
So all in all...I guess He gon' Drop some Shit to Try to Match..
I'll be waitin on his Verse...
.............................Till he gets his Hand Out that Rhino's Ass..
Now Thats diggin deep..So take ya Precious Time with No Rush..
so "Drop when your ready" and Uhh......"Good Luck"...-Young P
wasn't feeling the rhino line....not really feeling the closer either
I just wasn't feeling much of this verse. Weird rhyme scheme, weird structure, and not very hard hitting punches.
Game doesn't even return favors anymore, like he got an easy dickride pass.
So when I said I'll squash ya hopes, I shoulda expected a poke in the ass!
nope
I'm scared. This is one time I might not even be able to match Game's shit.
Cause I asked him about his structure...
nasisthebestever: ?
.................................................. .....And even he couldn't explain it!!
slight smile...this was aight
You lame with those rymes, no position, so ...dick... you tend to straddle.
Told him to search for real skill... And he went back to my first battle!!
ok, this was cool
And to think that I almost mistook you for a member of Deja Vu...
Not because of your talent...
nasisthebestever: my first verse ever was gayness!
....................And damn, you didn't think that your last one was too?!
this was eeh, the streched lines and structure softened the punch...Could have been alot better
This is your fault, right?, cause you planned to battle me, it's a due stop.
Its not just RB, even your avatar wasnt lookin forward to what u dropped!
nah, this is just a flip on the line that .:K:. used on Wise Ways
I don't search for my disses, so I was suprised to find this with my luck...
Now I'm letting everyone in on the big secret, it's true...
.................................................. ...................GAMETIME SUCKS!!
wack
this had a couple decent punches...a couple nice concepts that should have been used better though.Also hade that weird structure.
I've gotta go with P on this one, for better punches and concepts
Vote: P
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-W1