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iight...
Apathy
Timeless the rhymeless coward...
couldn't last ten seconds in his finest hour!
far too short... weak opener... 3/10
As fluid as milk gone sour, we should talk improvement...
because all the shit you drop is truely a bowel-movement.
decent... played... but decent... 7/10
I'll prove it.. don't even need twelve... It's embarassin'....
I know you mean well, but you fail in comparison!
filler... 4/10
You should be cherishin', every line that even acknowledges you...
Since its your first time i'll let it slide... no need for apologies dude
very forced indeed... it was quite good though... 7/10
While I give you a few here's some food for thought.. hope you don't choke
Your punches hit about as hard as arms caught in the ropes!
wack... didnt like that at all... 1/10
Until next time we meet bitch...
Assuming that you don't want to retire after you read this!
pretty good... short... but a decent closer... 6/10
Overall... 28/60... Weak in many places... Some bars too short... Some too long... Wack flow... some decent punches though... Elevate... pz
Timeless
your new to rap battles, so am i, but theres a difference in us
i've once been on here before,so when I bust i'm battlin under an alias
filler... no punch... just self-glorification... weak opener... 3/10
your just a stupid newby a baby, coz ya still have goo on ya rattle
u have no posts yet on here,so with your first you'll lose this battle
not bad... played rattle line... an iight punch tho... 6/10
and tha'll be bad new for you apathy, coz i'm constantly rippin scripts
ya flow is virus, that hits my computers bits to make it trip and flip
your sayin his flow is a virus that hurts your computer? really didnt get that... thats bad... 3/10
A 50 year old ho is tighter than you, ya need to make an impact
packed water flows better than you do,sorry to attract the real facts
lmao... this was really good... this hit hard... sorta made up for your last wack bar... 9/10
you'll get no vote this is no joke, you'll never be this weeks flavour
u contrast trying to be black, when ya still got a vanilla ice screen saver
lmao... i'll forgive you for the wack bar now... this was also good... 8/10
i'm a country dictator a style anialator, i send haters to the traitor
theres no point in finishin this flow his is so bad, so ill finish it...............
ergh... dropped yourself in it again... wack... no matter how hard a try... just cant make those words rhyme... 3/10
Overall... 32/60... You had 2 good bars... They won you this battle... Stay more consistent, please... Youve got some good ideas... but jus make sure it rhymes before you drop it... pz
v/ Timeless...
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