Bombz - I wasnt really feeling the rhyme scheme. Only one punch came alright, but the others fell short. I think you consentrated a little to much on your flow rather than your punches. You know what I mean hommie...

Pheoniix - You had a good verse. Most of your punches hit, and I think one of them hit really nice. I liked the flow, and the structure was good as well. Your flow was consistant, and everything seemed pretty good about your verse. Nice drop...

Vote - Pheoniix

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