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Old 02-04-04, 05:10 AM   #23
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V/Gametime

Young -- I liked your creativity w/ the punches, seen a few familiar concepts
but you flipped them quite well. your punches were creative but nuttin worthy
of wow!! overall your flow hurt you here coz i had to pick it up a lotta the time

Gametime--Structure works for some but not for you..the quotes took me
off balance sometimes n once again i had to pick up the verse again
but your punches were well thought of and some had potential to hit
really hard. jus concentrate on that more than structure pz

P.S----COM does vote for P in nearly all battles he's having l8ly
I'll be watchin it out for anymore pz
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