wow, this is really good, i mean like one of the best open mics i've read for a while. you had the flow down like a motherfucker, the style/strcture was brilliant. good topic and did it well.

9/10 < i'd give ya more but ya cant give 10 really, coz theres always going to be something betta :-)

fave bit =
Baby im sorry, but daddy's gotta go away....."
"I pray you grow up to be happy an free...."
"Live a good life an have a great family..."
"Treat your wife as though she is your queen.."
"And dont ever try an grow up to be like Daddy

(hot shit dawg, keep it up)