Great piece man, emotional and deep. Stays on topic thru out the whole verse, and it has originality too it as well. Good structure... and your flow was unstoppable. I also saw some nice multi's in there. I thnk this would make a good audio, and Id want too hear it if it ever goes audio. Id give this a 8.5/10. Keep on elevatin.
Pz.

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