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Old 02-04-04, 09:06 PM   #11
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From: E-Dub
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Mentality took this...

he had good rhymes....not too great flow....a few nice punchlines...I liked these lines from Mentality..

Quote:
Battlin me haha, you aint dropin dimes, you must of lost the loot
Cuz everybody knows this kid bites more than an inexperienced prostitute


^ nice opener....

Quote:
when i have you screamin like Dj’s doin Remixes


^ it seems like I've seen that line before, but I'm not sure...either way I like that...

overall ur verse was pretty strong...stayed consistent with the rhymes, n the punches stayed decent throughout...

Weapon MC...your verse had a nice flow to it..and decent rhymes...but ur punches weren't even close...and ur rhymes weren't even too close to Mentalitys.....this was kinda one sided in my opinion...

vote- Mentality

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111721

^ hit that up with some votes yo..

peace
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