Flow - pretty tight, I just noticed a line that seemed a little off every once in a while but overall good

Vocab - good, used your words well, didn't use three words to say what one could

Concept - was interesting, I didn't really vibe with it but that's just me - I think other people might. The repetition did pretty well but I think you should've mentioned the hospital earlier in verse two. 'Cause verse one and three both explained why you brought flowers but we don't get that in verse two untill the end of it.

Overall - nice verse, not my style but I can give it respect