I liked this piece. You didn't seem as much focused on multis as other om heads, but it workrd to your advantage, cause this was still nice. It was simple, but in a good way. Easy read. Yeah, this was nice.

Your emotions escape, to let go of things that create depression…
And Im confessin with everything I write I learn a new lesson…
^Ill

But I get right back up, I let it out, that’s why I write how I feel…
But this ink just makes the cuts go away that I now have healed…
^This is also one of my favs

Nice job.

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