Woah! This was ill. The story telling was pretty nice. This was my favorite read since i been at this site. That shit was ill. Normally i don't like choruses in texts but it went perfect. I dont normany like repetition either, but that is one of the things that made this so ill. Definatly worth the read. Keep up the good work.

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