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IP:
This was a awesome piece...great emotion and way to describe your pain...I felt hooked on every line. All though your end kinda threw me off...the but 3 times I felt was not neccasary...should've took one or two of them out to start your sentance. but all in all great piece...I really enjoyed the display of why you write and the pain your had/have.
If you got time hit something up in my sig if ye want...thanks..
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