it's not that is weak, but missing more. tell more in a line like
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Make me want to cry
Tears in my eyes
Dry up and smile
Damn this shit wild

try this but i still left it short so you can flow;

fresh like an open wound so I cry
feel the salty water drip my from eyes
Gotta dry up, try to put on a smile
I Deal with my problems, still shit is to wild