this was garbage but for your first post it's understandable you need to strengthen your lines and vocab throw a couple of metaphors in and multies and keep a good flow basically just spit the shit then put down or put it down then spit before you post it that way you can tell yourself that it sounds good

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun