E, E, E..... you never learn did you.
Punches: España, you really didn't have any. You need to actually diss the person, not try to glorify yourself. Zig, you had some nice hits. You didn't even need to come as hard as you did but there were alot of good hits.
Personals: E, you need to get past your Zig Zag's a fag. My little brother could come up with better. The incest line was good, but it's been played. Ziggy, you had some good personals. You had alot of them too. Theres not much to say to you on that one.
STRUCTURE/FLOW: You both had good structure, but flow hurt España. You're just off of it and your shit doesn't make sense. Zig Zag had a okay flow but I didn't feel it at times. It was kinda washy, but it worked. You both need to work on that.
Metas/Vocab: Not much as far as Vocab. España, you need to really work on your vocab. 3rd Grade nursery rhymes won't win you any battles dude. You need to come up with more origional stuff too. Your stuff has all been played. Zig Zag, you need to come out with more metas. You need to come up with more staying on one area instead of skipping around ideas.
VOTE: Zig Zag, he had hits and personals.

Some tips for Zig:
Night Night lights out when my verse hits you, It's like a border patrol dogg that just bit you//
Add a metaphor after that... here's an example
Nevermind that, not even he'd "bite off you", He's more like it to "write off you"/
That could have been used.
España.... Wackness emergency center.... use it man
Here's some help...
You from the show me now show me ya best/
How bout something... I don't know like this
You from the show me now show me ya best verse, I'm also from the show me I'll show ya to a hearse/
Something like that.
Anyway.... Wack battle, Ziggy Took it just becaue he come in punchin'. Use my tips... Zig-> TRY HARDER... I KNOW YOUR BETTER THAN THAT. España-> W.E.C. or please leave. Two options.

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