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ONLY ALLIANCE MEMBERS OR PEOPLE APPROVED BY ME OR A MOD CAN VOTE.....

Check... let the best win.

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España's back, better pack ya back pack/
ya gonna leave while I smoke a reef/
Zig Zag your a fag, you shoulda packed ya bag/
I'm good & from the hood & I hate wood/
From KCMO and bangin' the ho ya know/
You from the show me now show me ya best/
I put a bullet in someones chest cuz I hate incest/
I the Best, España I ban ya, I'll can ya/
I'll cram ya & ram ya and plus I'll damn ya/
Ya need to elevate from masturbate I educate/
My rhymes in times to rock dimes and shrines/
Your just Zig Zag and you can't spell it/

alright man

Haven't you figured out that I always beat you, Third time dawg this past deja vu//

I've K-Oed you twice past and still you, you Call me out like this time is brand new//

You claim you puffin weed but my dog smokes more than you do//

You think your wack stuff gonna make YOU rich, Better say good night to a win, and give it a kiss//

Night Night lights out when my verse hits you, It's like a border patrol dogg that just bit you//

You know your a fake thugsta cuz ya rep the hicks, your a fake straight dude ya suck the dicks//

I could rhyme like you any day I choose, But I'm gonna merk you so bad it'd be on tonights news//

These hits are hard enough to send you back to Mexico City, Man I tired of your bad reppin' of Kansas City//

This is my hometown and you don't even live in it, I'm gonna drain ya blood then dip ya skin in it//

I'll crush ya bones in tones they'd hurt angels, Nothin' could save you not even the strongest pain pills//

If there's one thing I would show you it's a fist to your face, Get out of our country Espana your are a disgrace//

I remember all ya hatin' on the Alliance, wackness in ya raps tho is a non-compliance//

All take ya lips and kiss my ass with 'em, I'll take your joints and roll em and take a pass with em//

zig zag gets my voe better puches
he actually had some personals
e's verse was whack as fuck and it didnt really make sense
both need to elevate
both need to work on vocab also

E, E, E..... you never learn did you.
Punches: España, you really didn't have any. You need to actually diss the person, not try to glorify yourself. Zig, you had some nice hits. You didn't even need to come as hard as you did but there were alot of good hits.
Personals: E, you need to get past your Zig Zag's a fag. My little brother could come up with better. The incest line was good, but it's been played. Ziggy, you had some good personals. You had alot of them too. Theres not much to say to you on that one.
STRUCTURE/FLOW: You both had good structure, but flow hurt España. You're just off of it and your shit doesn't make sense. Zig Zag had a okay flow but I didn't feel it at times. It was kinda washy, but it worked. You both need to work on that.
Metas/Vocab: Not much as far as Vocab. España, you need to really work on your vocab. 3rd Grade nursery rhymes won't win you any battles dude. You need to come up with more origional stuff too. Your stuff has all been played. Zig Zag, you need to come out with more metas. You need to come up with more staying on one area instead of skipping around ideas.
VOTE: Zig Zag, he had hits and personals.

Some tips for Zig:
Night Night lights out when my verse hits you, It's like a border patrol dogg that just bit you//
Add a metaphor after that... here's an example
Nevermind that, not even he'd "bite off you", He's more like it to "write off you"/
That could have been used.
España.... Wackness emergency center.... use it man
Here's some help...
You from the show me now show me ya best/
How bout something... I don't know like this
You from the show me now show me ya best verse, I'm also from the show me I'll show ya to a hearse/
Something like that.
Anyway.... Wack battle, Ziggy Took it just becaue he come in punchin'. Use my tips... Zig-> TRY HARDER... I KNOW YOUR BETTER THAN THAT. España-> W.E.C. or please leave. Two options.

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uppin' #1.... cuz neither of you know how.......
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Upping................
you all know 'Spaña merked this guy, why ya gotta lie? ya'll oughtta die, I can fly when i'm high....lol

lol this is old but i want mky win homos vote i will return them

This battle was wack.

Spanya or what ever the hell you're called. that was a terrible verse all round. No vocab, no punches, no personals...
I don't recall you even having a mehish line, all of them were pathetic man.
You need to elevate in all area's, no doubt, no question. Check the help list or something because if we had a hall of shame on this site then your evrse is the kind of stuff that would be nominated.

Your first couple of bars where ok (at least you had personals in there and some punches) but after that it just got boring and I didn'treally want to carry on reading it. You took this because Spaniaya's verse was wack, but you still need to elevate judging on that verse.

No hate

"Your first couple of bars where ok (at least you had personals in there and some punches) but after that it just got boring and I didn'treally want to carry on reading it. You took this because Spaniaya's verse was wack, but you still need to elevate judging on that verse."

In front of that I meanty to put Zig Zag, sorry bout that. It looked as if I was still feedbacking Espania.

Oh and Es, that I hate wood line had me rolling on the floor.

This was a wierd battle.. but i think Zig zag got this one... i liked his lyrics ebtter...

Return tha fava!! Vote on my battles.. \/ \/ \/ \/ down there.. PLEASE!!

uppin for votes kids......................................

not feelin either.zig-zag ur structures weak.........but at least u had punchlines...
not a lot to say espanas waz wack...seriously wack....all self glorification.no punches..no nothin...
both verses weak..but zig-zag came harder tho,,

vote-zig-zag

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ooops sorry,didnt read that only members can vote.my bad.
dnt think it matters tho.
espana was like a-spanner.lol.
sorryy
peace

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