first drop i've seen of yours
pretty good
the flow was the standout for me in this..
it just read so smoothly...not many pieces on here that do that
the topic was a bit played...and the hacking wrists and shooting yourself
thats my only major complaint really..could have improved with originality
but the story itself was interesting and the verse held my interest thruout
easy reading piece
improved as it went on too..
props