pitch, you suck...u need to leave this fuckin site...but assuming you decide to stay, you need to elevate majorly on the following categories:
punchlines
metas
multis
personals
structure
go to wec and ask bout that shit...they'll hook ya ass up...cuz you need it.

potent...i've seen betta drops from you than that. but you had nice punches...somewhat...no personals really, structure was a lil' fucked...but overall, you had a nice verse....keep it up...

vote-potent

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