10 lines
no crew
u drop first

Ha what were u thinking u didn’t read my last post
dropin my lines leaveen u scared like u seen a ghost

damn I think your thinking that u might actually be ready
brought u into my nightmare taken u out ,,im just like Freddy

u better hold on the next one is really gonna hurt
got u screamin like a white bitch when my hand grabs your foot from out of the dirt

what was I thinking battling some boy in a skirt
u thinking im bringin dinner nah im just bring dessert

and man let me tell ya u just like some damn kids on elm street
go back and tell your friends bout how u just got beat

HEY man how long is it going to take u to put down 10 lines comeon ......

This cat gets no love..i no theres building tension
..not to mention
pitch black only gets feeback at gay conventions
this cat wanna battle.....i'm bringin tech 9's to show
u got no flow..ya shit would be tight in u had a camel toe
potent is juss not my name...its my way of doin everthang
..u cant hang
.....ur better off goin to american idol tryna sang
i''ll leave this pussy bleedin to rapidly fo a tampax
you'll get droped quicker than a white dude in feb tryna hate on blacks


quick freestyle didnt have no time this only took 7 minutes

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UPPIN 4 VOTES

DROP LINKS AND I"LL HIT THEM

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Uppin 4 votes............................................. ...

DROP LINKS AND I"LL HIT"EM

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very 1 sided.potent was beta allround...punches,flow,struture was all beta...no personals tho...work on dat..
Pitch BlaCk verse was very week...no flow at all..punches fell short...and structure was shit!!!! evaluate....
keep it up both of u
V/Potent(simply beta around)
PLZ RETURN DA FAVA: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110860

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damn "ur better off goin to american idol tryna sang" wonder where u got american idol jokes from maybe off my last post ??

pitch, you suck...u need to leave this fuckin site...but assuming you decide to stay, you need to elevate majorly on the following categories:
punchlines
metas
multis
personals
structure
go to wec and ask bout that shit...they'll hook ya ass up...cuz you need it.

potent...i've seen betta drops from you than that. but you had nice punches...somewhat...no personals really, structure was a lil' fucked...but overall, you had a nice verse....keep it up...

vote-potent

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Dam this battle was kinda one sided, pitch black didnt really spit any lines that caught my attention. Really needs to elevate on almost every category.
Potent really didnt have to do much in order to take this battle but im not taking any credit away from him he did his thing.
He took every category therefore my vote goes to potent.

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man i just read my own on this one dont know what i was thinkin sometimes u just have bad days maybe u just have them more then others i put this one down way to quik

this was an alirhgt battle, both of u cna elevate your lines a little, ima go wihgt .....potent on this one cuz he had betta punch lines and syt but eh wasn't the best battle ive seen lately

vote: potent

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dun be mad cuz u lost, your just another victimLyod banks
"lyod banks motha fucka, with a gun and a clip/
ready to smack up all those nigga's that running there lip"

Ha what were u thinking u didn’t read my last post
dropin my lines leaveen u scared like u seen a ghost
weak, played
damn I think your thinking that u might actually be ready
brought u into my nightmare taken u out ,,im just like Freddy
whack meta
u better hold on the next one is really gonna hurt
got u screamin like a white bitch when my hand grabs your foot from out of the dirt
whack filler
what was I thinking battling some boy in a skirt
u thinking im bringin dinner nah im just bring dessert
weak
and man let me tell ya u just like some damn kids on elm street
go back and tell your friends bout how u just got beat
played..no punch




This cat gets no love..i no theres building tension
..not to mention
pitch black only gets feeback at gay conventions
played but ok
this cat wanna battle.....i'm bringin tech 9's to show
u got no flow..ya shit would be tight in u had a camel toe
played to hell
potent is juss not my name...its my way of doin everthang
..u cant hang
.....ur better off goin to american idol tryna sang
weak
i''ll leave this pussy bleedin to rapidly fo a tampax
you'll get droped quicker than a white dude in feb tryna hate on blacks
ok

Potent takes this pretty easy...better punches....PB jus didn't throw anything worthwhile...notyhing stood out...Check Whackness Emergency Center for battle tips kid...Potent had some k punches, but some of them were played....decent verse tho

Please drop an honest vote here guys...i took the time for you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112459