real dope wordplay and vocab but your flow was a lil off...
tha content of wat you wrote about kept me reading and i found it interesting...
tha whole idea of tha "square" was a nice touch to xplain wat you were talkin about...
if i had to change something I would say to stop bein TOO abstract with wat your tryin to say...

OVerall: good piece and keep droppin 7 / 10

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