decent indeed, your vocab and complexity are right on par but tha stucture you used kept me from findin tha flow, if it's just me...
tha topic itself is not played and gives it an originallity factor most flows nowadays lack, props...
tha way you touched on tha idea of settin tha challenge wit tha two people was uniquely an attention getter, good creativity...
overall, this was a nice piece that could be expanded into more if it were to ever be looked upon in tha future, keep droppin mad heat just like this...

9 / 10

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