nice drop. short but nice. it was consistent which is good. the flow was apparent.
the meaning was felt and it was complex enough. good topic to write about.
one thing though, wipes=whips. thats how you spell it. lol. i dunno, its just cuz
you said whips like 4 times, it kinda caught my eye. and try not to be so repetitive.
over all~ nice drop. hope to hear more.

hit this up in return plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112457

pz

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