word of advice: don't make a drop that is about how "hard" you or your city is unless it comes off wit mad heat, which this drop did not do AT ALL...
you need to work on every aspect of a decent drop except flow, and you especially need to work on your vocab, almost every word you used a lil kid would probably know tha exact meaning of, and simple drops keep me away from reading...
overall, keep your head up and improve, tha only way to eva go is up if your mind is set right...

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