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Old 02-08-04, 06:14 PM   #1
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Tha Fakt's

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Tha fakt of tha matter is im new to tha site-thats rite im a guest/
But you never know who was tha best-you could be-whod guess//
Any of you bustas wanna battle-dont-it would be unfair like tha IRS taxes/
Im down for any tough battle-just like a fite wit two-fat-kids//
Spit lyriks so quick-dont even think-its called lyrikal taktics/
I dont play games-run up to your house put it on wheels and snatch-it//
Im from tha West Coast-707-fairfield cliques/
We dont put up wit suckas-talk shit-we empty tha tech clips//
A lot of mutha fukkas said theres no way i could make it rappin'/
But now whos sittin here drinkin a beer and fukkin laffin'//
Im psycopathinc all fukked up in tha head/
Ready for a nigga to step up_click click clack_you dead//
So keep your opinions away and only look at tha fakts/
Mid-life crisis....i stab little bitches in they backs//
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Old 02-08-04, 09:22 PM   #2
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word of advice: don't make a drop that is about how "hard" you or your city is unless it comes off wit mad heat, which this drop did not do AT ALL...
you need to work on every aspect of a decent drop except flow, and you especially need to work on your vocab, almost every word you used a lil kid would probably know tha exact meaning of, and simple drops keep me away from reading...
overall, keep your head up and improve, tha only way to eva go is up if your mind is set right...

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Old 02-08-04, 10:47 PM   #3
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Keep on elevatin.. thats all I gotta say
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