i really enjoyed that one. almost as much as my own. lol. j/k. but seriously you
got sum talent. i like how you had more than just one end rhyme kinda like my
own. it makes the flow superb. i realy like the topic an consistency. the meaning
in this was felt. and well portrayed. for sum reason this is one of the best i've read.
keep at it man. i want to collab with you. i've never collabed with anyone
before. pm me if ur up for it. aight.

pz

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