wasnt feeling this as much as your other pieces to be honest
just seemed to lack something
a played subject to in a way
flow didnt seeme to be as smoothe as other joints neither..
feeling what you're writing about but it just seemed to lack a spark

'Where would we be without it.. There would be no more room for creation
The best thing we ever did...
... Was make pen and paper a combination
^thats the best lines in there
more of that and it would have been better

peace