sad to see respected pimps like maven get so few replies..

anyway..
dope piece
you kept it short and that was a good path cos you could have rambled on but didnt
very expressive verse and imagery and the personification of the frame thru out the verse was a great touch
stayed on the topic 100%..

to distance myself from retail
so I wouldn't have to face what was in store
^smiled to myself when i read that..

read it twice and it got better..
dope

made OM worth entering