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Old 02-09-04, 11:11 PM   #19
Bloomquist
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Nice shit right there...

Flow was good, topic was good but i know u didnt come up wit it lol

Wordplay was good, good way of tellin a story... I esp liked this line...

The People living in the streets, daily life goes by Unconsciously
Until that day, life is threatened, they can see Lights from Heaven
But You come like A messenger, and you are Protecting…
Because obviously, Heaven is Not Accepting…

Both did great nice stuff. Esp good for a first open mike by COM
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