more love ?....lol... thought your verses were quite expressive, specially credz, tho youve got plenty of practice at these... both verses seemed quite simple scheme wise... tech, your lines are a bit stretcvhed and so knocked the flow a bit, but they were quite consistant with eachother, content wise, so... all in all nice collab.... i would add more internals and carry the rhymes a bit further,... but.... keep at em..