Hit-man definately won this one....flow and structure was better....punches hit alot harder...multi's and metaphors were better too....
<+>- try to stay away from one-liners all the time, throws off the flow, up the vocab
and work on punches....keep at it man

return the favor:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431
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