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02-10-04, 04:54 PM | #1 | |
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Hit_Man --VS-- < + >
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-This's How we'r gonna do this-
8 lines no bullshit votes blind spits, due by 5:20 LATEST get at me
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02-10-04, 05:00 PM | #2 |
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yo what youy mean blind spits ya neva mentioned that
n i have different time to you get back at me |
02-10-04, 05:03 PM | #3 | |
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aite then, blind spits like it dun matta who spit first, jus spit
and due 25 mins from now -1-
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02-10-04, 05:05 PM | #4 |
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alright thats ok with me but
u spitting first then o what? |
02-10-04, 05:15 PM | #5 | |
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Fucka Bitch nigga, u mo of a bitch than Pamela Anderson
Ya couldnt Handle a Manican, say u Shittin? ya must be stain'n ya Pants-Agin Ill sho u how to ride a Beat, gotta Crew? ill devide ya Fleet All i gotta do to Wreck ya whole game is simply Tie ur Teeth cuz all yall niggaz do is Bite, i pull triggaz while u recite n Fuck u wiggaz, halfa ya bitch's actin black is really white N i aint gotta write, Wit jus my Brainstorm i'll leave ur Brains-Torn Like Lame-Porn, u've neva been hard, n bitch ull neva Change-Form -1-
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02-10-04, 05:37 PM | #6 | |
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tick tock times up....... spit anywayz jus hurry tha fuck up
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02-10-04, 05:41 PM | #7 |
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thinks his gangsta cus he got himself a sig
copy riting outlaw and alla sudden hes big? Assumes hes a G cus hes got it sayin outlaw ill cut up ya soft pussy flesh and eat it raw actin black, really just a reformed member of the k k klan this cat aint in it for the money, hes here for the dental plan, a traditional buck toothed farmer straight of "A town", where the only thing hes ever fucked, is the ground you cant even lift a gun, who gun hire you as i hit man the might be the end of the battle..but the war has just began bitch |
02-10-04, 05:42 PM | #8 |
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sz bout i being late
i just had two things goin onm at once this aint my best but it will do any ways lets get some votes in here |
02-10-04, 05:48 PM | #9 |
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Hit-man definately won this one....flow and structure was better....punches hit alot harder...multi's and metaphors were better too....
<+>- try to stay away from one-liners all the time, throws off the flow, up the vocab and work on punches....keep at it man return the favor:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112839 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded |
02-10-04, 06:01 PM | #10 | |
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IP: CC64 0500
yo personnally i think that both verses were aight for newbs.
so both of you no matter who i vote for just keep elevating. Hit man your verse was ok it had good punches but lacked a good flow. also next time try to aim the punches at the oppenent, your lines could of been about any one <+> your verse alos had some good punches. i particularly enjoyed the lines about the dental plan. you punches atleast were directed to wards the oppenent. you verse also flowed better as i red it both- try to improve punches and vocab, also think about sylables when you write. try not to use played shit(hit man) Vote- <+> his did it fo me had me rolling in some parts also tactix whats the piont of sayin who you thought won if ya cant actually vote |
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02-10-04, 06:16 PM | #11 | |
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^^ lol thas a joke rite?
alright les see what i have to make a diss on.... well i got this <....... o and this >..... o, no no, wait this + aite 1-1 peace
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02-10-04, 06:22 PM | #12 |
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lol man if i could change my name so u had sumin to work on i would
personally i think that verse was ok n ane ways is out law ur crew or is it jus a sig |
02-10-04, 06:26 PM | #13 | |
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ha its strait i was jus tryin to prove a point- n Outlaws jus a sig, sumthin i found on google
put it on cuz i had a reward on me so sumtimes i go by Outlaw -1-
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02-10-04, 06:30 PM | #14 |
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you part of any crew then or you jus goin solo ?
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02-10-04, 06:45 PM | #15 | |
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IP: 9E62 D6CE
hit me up on aim if ya wanna talk (hitemup573), dun freepost all on tha battle
but im solo rite now
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