yo personnally i think that both verses were aight for newbs.
so both of you no matter who i vote for just keep elevating.

Hit man your verse was ok it had good punches but lacked a good flow. also next time try to aim the punches at the oppenent, your lines could of been about any one

<+> your verse alos had some good punches. i particularly enjoyed the lines about the dental plan. you punches atleast were directed to wards the oppenent. you verse also flowed better as i red it

both- try to improve punches and vocab, also think about sylables when you write. try not to use played shit(hit man)

Vote- <+> his did it fo me had me rolling in some parts

also tactix whats the piont of sayin who you thought won if ya cant actually vote