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IP:
First thing ive read from you...
It shocked me... Lol... Scared me at first... Then a warmed to it...
Its very wierd just to look at... And reading it is no different...
Rhyme scheme was decent enough... Flow was suprisingly good for a piece that chopped itself up so many times...
This was quite good actually...
Hit up the links in my sig...
Thanks...
Pz...
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