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Old 02-11-04, 10:24 PM   #3
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From: PenNsyLvaNIa
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this was good some vocab
didnt use much tho not overdoing
it either... good topic good verses by both
some of oliver his verse didnt flow very well though,
kryo i liked the way your verse ended...
you both had good vocab Imagery was ok in this
nothing to be amzed of...
peep my other Open Mic called... _.::-No Luck I-::._ It's another to parter...
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