well done. the beginning was the best part of this i'd say. some of
the rhymes were lost but it still made for a good verse. i was actually
impressed by it, seeing your record. but then again, records don't
mean diddly squat if you think about it. but i got several images in my
head from this one. the structure and flow was good, with the exception
of rhymes missing. the vocab was nice, and i felt the topic, it had heart.

hit this up in return plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113569

keep writing. pz

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