Free this piece of writin was dope i was feelin it all the way.......i see you have improved rapidly since ur first open mic....on this 1 u had a nice flow gud wordplay and as i always say i love ya structure its dope the way u have 1 little line on its own so it stands out this was a dope piece overall no need 4 more explanation.......

fav line is:

Where would we be without it.. There would be no more room for creation
The best thing we ever did...
... Was make pen and paper a combination

^^^^this line was the best in the whole open mic 4 me loved it


nice drop keep droppin

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