well this don't tie in with Black history month since this was about latinos...altho I guess since it's non-white that somehow makes it fit in? lol

for the sake of criticism, this could use some work...mainly in the flow, it was lacking syllables in some lines..but the content was real good, u used nice imagery and got ur point accross while seeming only a little racist lol, but racism is good to a certain extent..overall this was a pretty nice piece, with a few minor adjustments it'd be a lot better though..

peace

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