I like.....I like how you started off giving the love feeling and how your morphed that into a sense of hate midway through your verse....Not much imagry...but good vocab...I liek the overall flow of the peice...One thing I noticed...dun knwo if you did it on purpose...was how the vocab changed with the mood of the peice...For example...You started off talkin bout love...and the vocab was simple...really felt it...and as you turned towards the hate part..you started throwing in swear words...and the flow kinda picked up nah mean? An excellant piece in my opinion...keep at it man...