not bad..

mad vocab in this..i had to read it a few times
so i can run it through smoothly..
this had its good points and its low points..
the fallacy part was tight...but towards the middle
i was beginning to doze off...it might be cuz its 1:11..
but nonetheless it kinda didnt hit my imagery nerve..
u came stronger in the end..more feeling to it..
more meaning...cool shit..

peace..