dumb guy thought he could stand up to this challenge
saw my rhyme stepped back and lost his balance
^ok this was a weak punch with predictable rhyme scheme
wouldnt out shine J with spits if ye wore lip-stick
is he holding hotness?nah the kid grips shit
^ok this is a weak punch also.....
suprising nobody bites your lines coz all em "fillers"
you wanna see pussy take a glance at the mirror
^blah not that creative but i'll give it an ok punch...overall
lyrics like un-needed maths teachers coz they sir- plus to requirements
this aint no formula one break but i'll have him re-tyreing
^meh best line so far except its a little stretched out there...
its like bullied midgets coz he not "up" for this fight
miss with my left then your face getting stuck with my right
^agian easy simplistic rhyme sheceme midgets are played ...word
your good lyrics unheard perhaps coz each verse is filled with dumb words
its like i beat you at losing my virginity the way i cum first
^ok that not a bad line try to stay away from sex but actually not a bad closer...


You've got a braveheart like Gibson..but an actor just the same.
But Dope is a role you can't pull off..Your casted as lame
^good wordplay a nice punch....good opener overall
Let me show you the ropes...start with the one around ya throat there
Stand on a chair to get on my level..I'll kick it and hang ya ass in mid-air
^this has been done but its good.....i like it lil played is all
While you stuck on the level I attained... and elevated from
I'll make you my son..celebrate your birth and death..one verse Son.
^nice nice i like the punches and creativity here......
I got no personals at all for you..you're still just a newb
Who talks shit and swallows spit..mouth still attached to the boob
^ehhe ok nice wordplay....good stuff ...punchin consitently
Your death will be another notch... for my winning streak
Like I slid across the gym floor without moving my feet
^hmmm......well......see this wasn't bad but....meh
Dumb kid...from the burbs..trying to make himself Hood Rich
Who couldn't "wet" my appetite for a battle even if he could spit
^oo nice wordplay here .....check it quelude took this easy no hate to anyone...

Oak already dropped the link hit it up y'alll..he it is again
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114031