12 lines
30 min
no b/s
You first.

aight my first battle in here...i'll try and adapt to the rapbattle stle



dumb guy thought he could stand up to this challenge
saw my rhyme stepped back and lost his balance
wouldnt out shine J with spits if ye wore lip-stick
is he holding hotness?nah the kid grips shit
suprising nobody bites your lines coz all em "fillers"
you wanna see pussy take a glance at the mirror
lyrics like un-needed maths teachers coz they sir- plus to requirements
this aint no formula one break but i'll have him re-tyreing
its like bullied midgets coz he not "up" for this fight
miss with my left then your face getting stuck with my right
your good lyrics unheard perhaps coz each verse is filled with dumb words
its like i beat you at losing my virginity the way i cum first

what did you mean when you said 30 min? 30 minutes to post my rhyme?...................................

You've got a braveheart like Gibson..but an actor just the same.
But Dope is a role you can't pull off..Your casted as lame
Let me show you the ropes...start with the one around ya throat there
Stand on a chair to get on my level..I'll kick it and hang ya ass in mid-air
While you stuck on the level I attained... and elevated from
I'll make you my son..celebrate your birth and death..one verse Son.
I got no personals at all for you..you're still just a newb
Who talks shit and swallows spit..mouth still attached to the boob
Your death will be another notch... for my winning streak
Like I slid across the gym floor without moving my feet
Dumb kid...from the burbs..trying to make himself Hood Rich
Who couldn't "wet" my appetite for a battle even if he could spit

Don't worry about it...we both came in under our time constraints.

dumb guy thought he could stand up to this challenge
saw my rhyme stepped back and lost his balance
blah..no punch...
wouldnt out shine J with spits if ye wore lip-stick
is he holding hotness?nah the kid grips shit
suprising nobody bites your lines coz all em "fillers"
you wanna see pussy take a glance at the mirror
filler and played rhymes
lyrics like un-needed maths teachers coz they sir- plus to requirements
this aint no formula one break but i'll have him re-tyreing
weak meta and punch
its like bullied midgets coz he not "up" for this fight
miss with my left then your face getting stuck with my right
played
your good lyrics unheard perhaps coz each verse is filled with dumb words
its like i beat you at losing my virginity the way i cum first
sex shit is mad played dawg


You've got a braveheart like Gibson..but an actor just the same.
But Dope is a role you can't pull off..Your casted as lame
decent...u already beat hime with this punch/meta
Let me show you the ropes...start with the one around ya throat there
Stand on a chair to get on my level..I'll kick it and hang ya ass in mid-air
played
While you stuck on the level I attained... and elevated from
I'll make you my son..celebrate your birth and death..one verse Son.
ok
I got no personals at all for you..you're still just a newb
Who talks shit and swallows spit..mouth still attached to the boob
whack
Your death will be another notch... for my winning streak
Like I slid across the gym floor without moving my feet
ok//kinda weak tho
Dumb kid...from the burbs..trying to make himself Hood Rich
Who couldn't "wet" my appetite for a battle even if he could spit
ok

Que took this easy..he threw punches...JMH only had filler..no real punches......check out WEC to get battle tips man...Que a kinda weak verse from what I've seen before..but still enough to beat JMH

PLease drop an honest vote here guys..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113550

i dont need no tips ive been text battling for 3 months and got plentywins, but the style of layout is very different here and i didnt know how much quality to put down coz i aint seen him battle....your break down was unfair...bar 1 for example you said there was no punch when there was, key word"stand up" but whateva ,nice verse quelude

i liked quelude shit his at least had some decent punches

next time i will explain my lines so you get the punches

Count this as an up as well...

JMH...Don't put explanations anywhere..it's newbish. Just keep dropping..your shit was O.K. you just need to elevate..also..opinions differ..some people value different things when it comes to voting so just chill and let them speak..you can't change their minds..if it's unfair report it to Investiagted Reports..other than that...let's keep the votes coming and drop ya links.

drop what links?you want a link to an ill verse i dropped yesterday in another forum?

No hate to you man..but I dun care how many wins you have...ALways drop dope...dun blame it on not know ing your opponent..And ya first bar was weak..a mad played punch...No offense..jus an honest vote

quelude won this.......

but both verses were hella weak

work on it

Uppin.


Post and Drop a Link.


Quelude vs. Jmh