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Old 02-13-04, 06:26 PM   #8
UrbanReelist
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the love and hate in this peice made it stands most people can't really give mix emotions in verses and go from hate to love smoothly like you did nice vocab anyway and pretty decent drop
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I smiled at the devil as his sweat pounded the ground and left burnt black marks on the path as he walked towards me with crimson-like skin and universal black horns and as he reached for my lifeless corpse a black-robed figure that was hard to discern whispered to me "Your days are numbered".
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