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Old 02-14-04, 01:00 AM   #11
SMZ
Flyweight
 
Posts: 102
From: Charleston, SC
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Several nice lines, liked the emotion you gave. As mentioned there were some missing rhymes. Liked this line:
Math im x......... the way i never stay constant

...and what's a "wanigan"?

Hit something in my sig - thnx. (Broken Metamorphosis if you haven't yet preferably)
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