Dam penskillz, maybe not one of ya best but i enjoyed this one jsut as much as ure latest open mics.

Breakdown: You had alot of sorrow and pain in this one, but sadly thats how i related to it. It was very true, and spoken from tha heart, u didnt just write it to geed feedback, and i enjoyed that. U mastered the structure, and emotion was clearly visible. A very enjoyable poem, Thank you for the read

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