Fuck, that was long...i liked the way you kept on the subject...good rhymes, nice flow, "On the cosmic radio, as gamma ray wave communication breaks up//
The anger inside changes my bio-chemical make up/
While I make major Repairs to my five cybernetic chain guns//
Then I set out to vanquish, all the glitches in The Matrix/" that was heavy...overall it was tight but the words seemed forced if ya get me...it was confusing, but you could make it less confusing by adding a chorus...good story though...i say 8.5/10.

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