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Originally Posted by Credz
This was alright here i thought.....structure was good in this.....the flow to this seemed to be good, it flowed pretty well i thought....you had some good vocab in there....try ading some more multies though to make it better....keep at it.
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basically took the words outta my mouth....
liked your metas ... and wittiness....
ok vocab....not bad...
multies would help a little...
good flow...
good drop, keep at it ...