Nice stuff. A good topic of course, and it was a very emotional piece.

I liked how it was dedicated to your X girl. Mostly all the valentines day poems in here are always for thier girls and stuff, but once in awhile i see a nice change like this. I enjoyed the topic alot. Emotion was extremely well, You told of how you longed to go back to her etc. etc. and i enjoyed ure detail in story telling.

and if i could only go back to those days would I, hell yeah cause those days can never be replaced, only misplaced in the average mind, but I will rewind back in time over and over untill one day this is finally mine........

Thats my favorite line A good end to a great poem. Really showed how much u cared, and this overall was an excellent piece of work. Much thanks for the read.

~holla if ya hear me

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