haha nice last 4 lines HaloB for a newb

Punches and Personals-HaloB took this easily cause it was hard to read rundmk's verse and HaloB had some nice last 4 lines for a newb, no personals at all, elevate on that

Structure and flow-HaloB, cause rundmk's structure and flow was fucked up really bad and it needs help go to wackness emergency center for details on that dawg

Multis and Wordplay-Maybe one attempt at both by HaloB, but that's it, both need to elevate in these categories..........

Conclusion-HaloB took this wit a simple verse and both need to elevate alot!!!!!!! Before thinking they can have higher competetion, iight

Vote-HaloB

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